假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.结束语已为你写好。
范文(124词):
Dear Miss Evans,
I hope this email finds you well. My classmates and I have adapted a short play from our English textbook and we’re excited about it. The play humorously explores misunderstandings between two neighboring families, emphasizing the value of communication and empathy.
We would greatly appreciate your expertise in refining our pronunciation, enhancing our expressive skills, and advising on stage presence. Your input would be invaluable in bringing our characters to life and making our performance memorable.
Could we possibly meet for a rehearsal and your guidance next Monday at 3:30 PM in the school’s drama room? We believe your feedback will be crucial for our success.
Thank you very much for considering our request. We look forward to possibly working with you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
简单版(113词):
Dear Miss Evans,
I hope you’re well. My friends and I made a short play from our English book. It’s a funny story about two families who live next to each other but often misunderstand each other. The play shows how important it is to talk and listen to solve problems.
We need your help to make our speaking clearer, our acting better, and to know how to move on stage. Your advice would mean a lot to us.
Could we meet next Tuesday at 3 PM in the school’s drama room? We think your tips could really help us do a great job.
Thank you for thinking about helping us. We hope to see you soon.
Best,
Li Hua